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I can't believe i didn't discover this game sooner. AAAAA BRYANT YOU PURPLE THING GET OUT OF MY HEAD! EVERYWHERE I LOOK I CAN ONLY SEE THAT PURPLE THING. He has truly possessed my life......I hate him(affectionate) 

Anyway, I absolutely love this game! I love aris and Bryant so so much!!! Bryant route untill now is really cute and sweet (it's probably still this way because there's haven't any updates for his route but I'm not complaining) I need these two little thing to kiss and also give everyone therapy (but the therapist will probably need therapy after just one session with all of them LOLOLOLOL!!!!)

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I like the joke about therapist LOL Alright! I have to say that in the upcoming update, there will be a little bit of hurt&bitter (depending on how it's received, it might be more than just a little bit?) But the route that follows will be absolutely delightful and sweet! and his ending was the best among all of them. 

so glad that you like Bryant! I need to take some more time to rest before starting to start working on B789. During the waiting period, if you're interested, you can also try out other routes - it's very interesting, too!(*^▽^*)

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Ah crap- hopefully my heart is ready for the update.....。°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°。

And I've already finished deacon route and all of the ending and achievement! (Hehe staying up all night was worth it) THE WRITING AND ART IS SO GOOD WHAT!?!?!? I ESPECIALLY LOVE THE ART WHERE DEACON GET A NEW OUTFIT AND HE'S SLEEPING WITH ARIS WHILE HUGGING A TEDDY BEAR (give this man 100 Teddy bear and all the love he deserves) gonna start caeran route soon! Need some time to recover from deacon route mental damage LOL (≧∇≦)/

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The Deacon route left me completely satisfied (and exhausted!), and I'm thrilled you loved that CG as much as I do! I’m also super proud of the dream sequence where a giant D and tiny A stroll together on butterflies—what a moment!

I once thought Caeran’s route would be the heaviest (but Deacon’s emotional toll is unmatched…), yet here Aris shines brightest—he’s at his best and my favorite version of himself.(*^▽^*) Hehe, thanks for playing and loving it; knowing someone enjoys the game this much is pure fuel for my soul!!

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I just finished the caeran route and collect all the ending and achievements! And WHAT THE HECK WAS ALL THAT?????????????? MY HEAD IS SPINNING IM THROWING UP WHAT!? ( ☉д⊙)!!! 

This route made me absolutely flabbergasted, you- you devil, how do you write this it's so peak fiction and evil at the same time.

I HATE THIS GREEN GLOB/pos I understand why aris want to eat him now.........Tbf though everything about this route is amazing! I also love aris in this route (ಥ﹏ಥ) his desperation is too real- it's hit too close to home but I love this aris so much it's definitely my favorite too (⸝⸝ᵕᴗᵕ⸝⸝) 

AND CAERAN! he made me unwell/pos, I hate him so much(affectionate) I need this green glob set on fire. 

ANYWAY THIS ROUTE IS ABSOLUTELY DESTROYING ME! 100/10 WOULD DEFINITELY GO THROUGH THAT AGAIN ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* 

Side note: I can't seem to unlock this one SC even I replay everything (๑°ᯅ° ๑`)

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TT I read this review three times... Yes! This is truly very exciting! Caeran Route is definitely the one that I am most satisfied with and have put the most effort into. To receive such high praise from you is truly an honor for me!! Hehe, it's completely a devil, completely annoying, but so captivating!! This is really wonderful! Thank you for taking the time to collect all the endings and achievements !!(*^▽^*)

Regarding this SC, I have checked the code and it should be possible to collect it! However, in a less obvious sub-branch. Probably  C6—— after A cutting Caeran's hair, and before the scene where A is having the meal( which is actually Trone).it describes a scene where A meets an unknown person outside the warehouse, and has two options: "..." And "You're not Caeran", you need to select the latter option to obtain this SC! Hope this will work!!(>^ω^<)

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Im literally obsessed with this game, me and my friend are planing to cosplay Aris and Daemon. I REALLY LOVE THEIR TOXIC DYNAMIC

This is PEAK

OMG! It's so wonderful that you guys like it! Cosplaying Deacon would be a real challenge(*^▽^*)... I'm really looking forward to it!!

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My friend asked me if I could draw Aris being tied up in the air while they hit him with a bat. That disgusting creature in the back who is threatening poor little Aris' life is THEM. True cruelty.. He doesn't deserve any of this!! (Or does he?)

OMG I can imagine that scene TT It's a bit cold, but also kind of hot (what) Aris in the first half of Deacon's or Caeran's route deserves a good hitting like that... But his badness might not improve because of it, but get worse instead (Wow, Caeran would be so happy!!) 

I think he needs some pain mixed with mental attacks, like a spanking (but I can't draw that, this isn't that kind of game!) Deacon and Caeran are both too focused on mental attacks, so I feel like only Bryant could do it??? This might double the self-esteem damage Aris suffers, but his sad face would really be so cute.

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I feel like some damage on Aris' part would need to occur if improvement were to be seen on his part. He's just that kind of bad that really can't be helped without some kind of pain (I guess force too?), you know? It's saddening to think about, but I feel like if Aris were to be recovering from his harmful habits, he'd have one too many mental breakdowns,,

Wow, you've hit the nail on the head TT! That's exactly it! He's bad enough to do bad things without hesitation, but when confronted with the consequences of his actions, his hidden bottom line surfaces and torments him, demanding that he take responsibility.

This contradictory and chaotic moral trait is really fascinating! He might become more corrupt, but he might also become stronger and more responsible through sheer determination. 

I can totally understand where you're coming from! Many times, I feel that while the plot is reasonable, it's a bit too cruel for Aris. But he needs to go through pain to gain the determination to change! Trust me, the very end of the game is a huge transformation that gives meaning to all these struggles!! (*^▽^*)

I drew the rose cake Arise! This is really cute TT. The design is excellent!

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WHAHAHAHWHAHA IT'S SO CUTE!! Thank you so much for drawing him, thank you thank you!! 😭😭💗💗 I really didn't expect you to find the time to make a full fledged drawing, but instead a doodle.. Ahh, I will cherish it greatly!! 💗💗

Yay!! I'm really glad that you like this painting. Sometimes I sigh that I designed Aris's clothes so simply and unattractively. But this new design looks much better!! Feel free to use it! (*^▽^*) It was completely drawn for you and your friend💗💗💗💗💗💗

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Deacon.. is finally finished!!! I like to think that Deacon was the shortest when he was younger and eventually grew to be the tallest when he got older, so I tried to make that apparent in his little figurine! I was thankfully successful, but he also got really fat as well.. (Fat Deacon is still a cute Deacon, so it's okay!)


He gets the yummy yellow sludge

Wow, this is just so cute ww It makes me really want to pet his head and cheeks TT (and he looks like he loves eating!) You're really amazing!! Making these intricate and adorable figurines! And the improvement is so noticeable TT  love these little cuties!

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Hi! I'm a translation student, and I would love to translate your game into Spanish. In that way more people would know about it. I've already made a translation for a game; you can check on my profile. Let me know if it sounds interesting to you, and I'd love to discuss it further. Thank you for your time. 

My twitter account for contact is: @iukur0

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I'm sorry! I have to decline this request. 

The game is still unfinished, and its English translation is in a state that hasn't been finely tested or proofread after being translated by AI, so it's not worth being translated again. My plan is to update more human - translated versions after it starts selling, and Iwon't accept any translation plans for now. 

But still, thank you for your idea, and wish you all the best!(*^▽^*)

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我太喜欢这部游戏的文戏了,情感爆发与人物塑造都好得难以相信!这会是我2025最喜欢的视觉小说游戏,尤其是我们的主角艾瑞斯,我爱他(因为他不懈余力的坏)!中文翻译(水准很好)与自带的攻略也十分贴心!期待完成作的上架,我会毫不犹豫地为这部游戏付钱。

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我在把这部游戏全力推销给我的朋友,祝作者一切都好以及我爱你《3

💕🤗💕嘿嘿嘿!!

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卧槽中文翻译好是因为主包是种花的(!)感谢喜欢啊啊啊我将持续制作。。

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竟然是国人作者。。我要追随你。。我很期待会不会有艾瑞斯真杀回上层的结局(目前只打通了D线 重4我了),艾瑞斯你加油罢!

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有的!C线已经即将杀入了(?)B线最后也会有类似结局 但可能发展和大家想的不太一样哈哈哈

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通关了B线《3,果然精神病与否是需要对照组的啊www打D线的时候完全看不出艾瑞斯还是如此雄心壮志(迫真)的大革命家,he5的结局我没太能看懂,艾瑞斯和布莱恩特怎么‘’唰‘一下就齐齐跑路了?

he5的话确实当时写得很入迷但有莫名其妙的时间线跳转所以读起来很迷惑(?)。

大概是现时间线 A吃了B后 --> 回忆 曾经刚刚离开上层试图自杀,却偶遇B并找到工作 --> 回到现时间线 因为吞食而两者融合,A因为放心B无法离开自己而彻底道德败坏,B也逐渐接受了这一点的奇妙好结局(!)

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以及,我注意到布莱恩特的爸爸似乎搞的是骨科?那应该使用叔叔或伯伯,舅舅是母方兄弟的称呼

好!主包将修复

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通过了C线!这条线的内容相当丰富,我甚至认为C线是内容最为精彩的一条,艾瑞斯的人物形象在这条线里得到了最大的补完。D&B线都或多或少会因为过去将艾瑞斯的行动束缚一定程度,但C线由于完全陌生,反而像新星爆炸那样抛射出了最多的物质w(并且艾瑞斯的战力得到了史诗级加强)也许与C线的完成度更高有关?每条线都有不一样的风味,初稿居然只是为了反传统吗,,你这家伙真是强得可怕啊(?)还是D线的经验!我也没想到靠近卡洛安他会有这种心情的可能。C线含有大量完整可见的艾瑞斯立绘真是太好了,这世间竟有如此坏b萌物。卡洛安在C6前总有一种无所忌惮的纯真恶意,他有山羊塑吗?那种深山老林里能顶死人的山羊,但头发又很像章鱼,细看的话像花苞,在外表设计上卡洛安可以说是相当有特色了。艾瑞斯在这条线上真是完全的对抗路上单,但时不时又会突然被美貌闪一下wwwww艾瑞斯你现在最重要的事是买个名刀和复活甲。特洛恩的戏份也很有意思,被比作’兄弟‘,有着相似的字体颜色(一模一样?)与发色,最后却变成一盒便当呈在’兄弟‘与’兄妹‘间。我很喜欢特洛恩与艾瑞斯的相差w布莱恩特真是无处不在口牙。。。

但卡洛安过去.ver的立绘还挺好看的(雾)一到C6以后人物的复杂性就一下拔高了呢,如果D知道是由于他天天碎碎念才导致艾瑞斯与卡洛安的相逢带有一种诡异的宿命感会是什么心情呢?w不过艾瑞斯和卡洛安竟能被双双认成le啊.....实在是太萌。致敬传奇魅魔艾瑞斯(与卡洛安)!

he6是怎么回事呢?艾瑞斯又死了吗?ne6出现的艾瑞斯趴趴(?)很可爱,有实体化的想法吗?真是经典的wf结局啊,世界最佳搭档与罗宾(迫真)

我从来没给任何视觉小说题材的游戏写过这么长的repo,除了主线四位神人以外,其余角色的特色也相当鲜明。不管是平面人物还是圆形人物——这都很好!除了期待主线剧情的完整叙述以外,E也是个神龙见首不见尾的人物呢w期待他的出场!

C线也是主包最喜欢和最想写的一条!!但因为写得很意识流评价不是很高啊啊 你能喜欢真的太好了TT 我哭。。其实在C6之前收到“C和D感觉很像啊有必要做两条线吗”的评价很多所以我大受震撼把C789写得很丰富(也很挣扎。。整整花了四个月TT)!主包很喜欢CA但对DA的关系有种复杂的心情。。真的很不一样啦!!

特洛恩的字体颜色居然一模一样吗我将修复。卧槽C线真的三个穿围裙的金发男搞得我笑死了 我也真的很喜欢便当场景和CAT(卡洛安x艾瑞斯x特罗恩)三人的奇妙关系(!)

Ne6和he6也是主包在C789最喜欢的结局!he6的话是常规的“在幻觉中幸福沉沦”结局,某种意义上和D线有类似感?再次成为自己最讨厌的人笑死。周边的话主包可能得等游戏火了才能出,,,现在是纯粹连翻译钱都拿不出来的真正个体户哈哈哈。。虽然也不太可能火因为题材比较小众啦!!

E的剧情会在三条路线完结后的隐藏线!(接在C线后面)虽然会比较短,但是是游戏里的核心部分。主包不知道什么时候才能做到那里啊好崩溃o(╥﹏╥)o 感谢喜欢!!读repo读得真的很开心TT 爽爽爽爽爽

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另外一提,D7砸碎镜子的成就我刷不出来;(,究竟要怎么选择呢?还是说bug?

介素bug TT 其实是比较好找的小成就但代码我忘记放进去了TT 这两天就会修复!

btw can i know why bryant is paused?

Because I need to rest TT

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THE GAME IS SO PEAK OMG, I LOVE DEACON SMMMM. IS IT POSSIBLE IF U CAN GIVE ME MORE LORE AND STUFF ON HIM (LIKE BDAY OR SMTH IDK ANYTHING IS FINE)?  I HAVEN'T FINISHED THE GAME YET BUT ITS REALLY GOOD.  I had it downloaded before tbh but i never ended up playing much of it (sad mistake of mine).

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ALSO I LOVE THE KANNA PFP

Don't worry! Deacon's birthday and background story are elaborately described in D789. I really like Kanna TT. Yttd is my favorite game in the past three years!

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tysm, and yttd is so good honestly. its my second favorite game of all time. 

ALSO RANDOM BUT WHAT DO U THINK ARIS AND BRYANT WOULD BE AS ANIMALS?

Oh!! I've thought about this a bit, but I wasn't sure if I was accurate. I also added CD to the mix!  hope you like them!

Aris is a bit odd. I think in normal life he would be very human and complex, but in front of friends he's like a small, irritable but harmless creature! Like a Chihuahua (?), or an irritable little hamster? I like the latter one!

For Bryant, I think he's like an animal that looks a bit fierce but is unexpectedly gentle and stable, with low combat power! Like a black panther or a long-haired cat. large birds or deers would also fit.

Deacon, he's less human (?), so I've considered a variety of possibilities. The closest is a Golden Retriever? Friendly to humans but cruel to its own kind, two-faced (?). Then there's the cow, which is a bit hot(?). Because of his hair color and personality, I think a sheep or a polar bear would also be suitable!

For Caeran, because his eyes give off a sheep-like impression? That devilish sheep hhh Some people say an owl. I personally think he'd be more like a crocodile or snake. A Venus flytrap would also fit, but that's in the plant category!

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THANKS!! i'll drop some art im doing rn below tmmr.. im not done yet and the glue takes a while to dry..sigh....... i currently only drew  bryant(normal and mermaid one) but im planning to also do aris MAYBE DEACON AND CAEREN TOO IDK THO..

It sounds really exciting!!! I will wait hehehehe(>^ω^<)

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This is the wip it's cute but I don't think necessarily good💔💔

As shown below Bryant (boksu) they'll just be hanging there 

IF YOU TAKE THE TAPE OF YOU CAN SHAKE THEM WHICH I FIND REALLY FUN AND CUTE

Idk about mermaid Bryant tho.. Since his whole torso would move😓😓😓


OMG, this is so cute and creative!! I'm also surprised at how quickly you did it! The mermaid Bryant design is so beautiful! I love the pretty blue tail oww, it must look so cute when it sways...

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IVE BEEN STRUGLING TO GET THE LAST 2 ACHIEVEMENTS FOR HOURS.. (c8 pick up the rope somehow and d7 insist on smashing the mirror) SIGHHH

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For C8, you need to choose the rope instead of the apron at the end of the investigation phase at the beginning of C7!  Then, at the failed section where you can get the ending 'trio run away' (you can check the Walkthrough for more information), and unlock a hidden bad ending!

As for the D7 achievement, I checked the code and found it was a bug! I forgot to add the code to unlock the achievement TT This isn't your fault, It should actually be obtained in the Mirror Twins section!!

Thank you fo being willing to spend time to collect all the achievements and letting me know about this bug!! but sorry for can't get all the achievements for now!!o(╥﹏╥)o I'll release a revised version in a few days!! ( As I think there might be more bugs that haven't been reported... and the data transfer fee for uploading once is a bit expensive TT)

could you sent me a link for the walkthrough?  

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It's right there in the file download list above! The file name is "攻略-Walkthrough (V0.66).txt". 

If you're unsure where to obtain the ending after picking up the rope, it's at the section where C8 Caeran defeats M&V and convinces Aris to burn the car,  failed leads to this bad ending.

YIPPIEEE !!! thanks alot for the help <3

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i only need this picture and then im done!!(for now hehe)

The game is so well done!!! 

>w<

OMG, I checked it and found that this bug caused another bug. I changed a line of code to fix an error in one of Deacon's CGs, but I put the code in the wrong place, so it turned one bug into two... o(╥﹏╥)o

You successfully collected everything!! It's just that the game has some issues, omg TT. Thank you so much for the time and effort you've put into it!!(*^▽^*)

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thanks for making the game,it was alot of fun and i cant wait for more! 

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这是我今年玩的游戏以来最喜欢的一个游戏!每个人物性格塑造外表都特别好♡♡!第1次玩到这么多收集和成就玩起来真的特别有成就感。我喜欢游戏里面每一个角色,都特别有个性。作者的这些设计理念又是从哪儿来的(这个有点隐私了可以不回)也特别喜欢画风。一些爱恨纠缠的东西♡,我没有推特。不知道有没有其他平台可以关注,我想永远关注作者,永远永

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谢谢你啊啊啊!!TT 在b站但最近国内风波比较大所以是半死不营业专注做东西这样。。可以关注一下steam上的此游!!会缓慢做完的!

设计理念的话比较复杂,并且因为制作周期太长变动了很多次!!我初心是作为一个重度文游玩家,觉得恋爱向游戏的主角都比较被动善良、剧情比较简单、感情线也太阳间(?)或者太单一,因此想要做一个更加反传统和难以被定义的恋爱游戏!但它最后意外地做得恋爱感不是很强哈哈哈。。。(怎会如此!)

Aris是非常重要的主视角,他的内心有比较多需要被挖掘的互相矛盾的地方并且防备心很强,甚至可以说整个游戏里真正需要被攻略是A。我对他的塑造在所有人里是要求最高的,因为他就是“反传统”和“难以被定义”本身的叛逆角色hhh

B是以传统游戏中主角“拯救”堕落的攻略对象的反转,较为“好人”、和“正常”,但此游怎么会有真的正常人呢(?)

D是传统游戏里对坏蛋攻略对象死缠烂打甚至斯德哥尔摩的视角反转(好日乙!),因为精神病会一下好一下坏,我认为是最精彩和古怪的一条线!好一个活在梦里的男的(?)

C就是咋一看让大家觉得熟悉的病娇阴湿男,但深入了解后会发现这男的谁也不爱,要是服从不反抗的话只会被控制化为养料SOS 所以是和坏蛋主角打来打去的大反派!

主角四人一开始都是建立在刻板印象和立意上的,我在写完初稿后也只是把它当做简单写完简单结束的十万字左右中篇,但没想到越写加的东西越多TT 事实上几乎所有“童年”和“反叛军”的塑造都是写着写着为了自圆其说丰富人设加进来(尤其C线从第三章起就是完全重写,“特洛恩”这个角色也是原本没有的。。)所以现在已经偏离初稿太多了,搞得我每次更新都很痛苦!!

啰嗦了一堆啊TT 真的很高兴你喜欢这个游戏!!我会继续努力的(*^▽^*)

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when will the game be finished? im really looking forward to it!

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Since I'm working on this alone and life is pretty busy, I can't say for sure. It's probably going to take one to two years?? hh

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Younger Aris in his band outfit looks really cute,,

Also, is there any platform you prefer to use when seeing videos other than BiliBili? I was thinking of sending in some links of my videos from TikTok since I'm unable to post on BiliBili, but I'm not too sure if you're able to see them on your end..

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TT I really love this!! I think the younger 3 are all very cute, especially B with three outfits?! I don't know how that happened, but he really loves fashion(*╹▽╹*)

TikTok is OK! !!Although I usually only use Bilibili, I can also see videos from other platforms. Wow, I'm really looking forward to seeing the videos you make, please let me know the link TT

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Alright, that's good to know!! This is technically just a speedpaint of a Caeran drawing I made recently,  but I think you'll like the surprise I put in there 🥰

https://vt.tiktok.com/ZSBBr8p9g/

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omg this is really too surprising TT I went to your homepage to eat every work TT and accidentally left too many comments hope you don't mind TT this is great!! Why didn't you tell me earlier!! This is GREAT!!

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Also, the rose cake Aris reminded me of a series of drafts I made a few months ago themed around "Flowers and Alice." Unfortunately, I was too busy to finish them at the time TT. 

In those drafts, the flower representing Aris was the intense, control - symbolizing rose! I'll post them below, hope you like them (*^▽^*)


My favorite pieces are the new works about Caeran (Wow, this kind of madness is amazing...), the hand-drawn style animations of young Deacon and Aris (the monologue and atmosphere are so accurate that I was shocked to think you could predict the future?!), Aris' rose cake outfit (I don't know the foreign term?! Can I draw this? It's so beautiful TT), and the BA summer illustrations and comics!! I was really shocked and felt so happy TT

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Ahh thank you so much for the compliments!! It really is an honor for you to see all the drawings my friend and I have made for the game!! 💗💗

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You're free to draw Aris' rose cake outfit!! I spent way too long on him only to not like him in the end, so I'm glad he's getting some love,,, 


Also, I was actually really worried about the little hand-drawn style animation of Aris and Deacon because I wasn't too sure if you were able to read it with the low quality,, 😓 I'm really glad you were able to understand it!

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AWW THIS LOOKS SO CUTEEE

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im abt to get this game and it already looks amazing !! :D

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owww Let's do it! 90% you may not regret?!

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i loveee the gamee the stylee is so cuteeee !!

🥰🥰🥰🥰HELL YEAH!!!

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OMG I love the arts and characters so much 💗

Thank you!!💗💗

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I havent finished this game yet but i love it SO MUCH!! the art style is super pretty and i adore the characters,, i made a plushie of deacon as well bc hes my fav so far!! hes pretty choppy tho (⌒_⌒;)

😭😭😭😭😭😭awww so cute!!!!!!! I can't believe you even made him a tongue hhhhh silly cutie boy D-chan....!!!😋😋

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When Caeran was stuffing his mouth with chips and getting crumbs literally everywhere in the COMPANY CAR my friend and I just yelled "fattie" and threw insults at the screen for a good minute or two 💔

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Bring hell to Caeran Dotos

OMG this is cute I can't help but laugh....!!! shit both of you are genius, I love this and will use this meme to death

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I LOVEE THE GAME SM ALREADY IT'S SO WELL MADE GNG!!!! QUESTION THO... are the forms of deacon,bryant and i forgot his name.. canon?(starting page)

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hmmm...? I don't understand what's the meaning of 'canon'?! can you explain it for me more clearly?

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Oh, if you mean whether it's official or not, yes! This is not any fanwork or derivative creation, nor does it use any AI-generated content. It is completely an original character, story and game created by me alone! Don't worry, have a great time! (*^▽^*)

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great to know that ai wasn't used but i meant if the starting page (i assume bryan as a mermaid, deacon as a demon or devil and i forgot again.. as an angel are already in the game or are gonna be in the game

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also another question..haha! is caeron the imposter (common chapter 3 normal end 2 reverse)

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I understand! In fact, the start screen was just drawn for fun and doesn't really mean anything; it was just made to look nice (?). The story won't include similar content! Unless I successfully finish the game and have the support to release a DLC TT.

As for the other issue, that's something you'd only know after playing the  completed game! I suggest treating it as a separate character (i.e., a hidden route's love interest)! Since I'm not sure if you've played Caeran's (I can tell you really can't remember his name!) route or know more about Caeran, they have the same abilities, but in reality, they're quite different!

All in all, thank you for playing and seriously raising these questions!^^ I also suggest that if you can't remember the names, you can simply use the initials of the names instead, which would be more convenient. That's what I do罒ω罒

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I just played through the new update and OH. MY. GOD IT WAS SO GOOD!! The new art and the way you colored it was so good, and the way the route was written really gave more depth into the character's relationships and how they see each other.. It even brought on some new questions as well! Safe to say, I am EXTREMELY HAPPY WITH THIS UPDATE!!! 💗💗💗

Also, I had planned to create a little Deacon figure to go along with kitty Aris and mini Bryant, but he's still not painted yet..  Instead, here's some little concepts I drew for a summer series collection! They're obviously still concepts, but they're pretty good enough to be the drawing itself already,, (except for that mermaid Bryant drawing)Aris 1Bryant 1Aris 2Bryant 2

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Anyway, PLEASE KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK!!! I'll definitely make sure to put away some money for when the full game releases, you can bet on that!

TT oh my god, I'm really surprised that you completed the update so quickly!! And with all these wonderful compliments, you have really been so kind to me! I'm actually a bit uneasy about the new content, so these words have really been super super encouraging to me... And there are these beautiful artworks as well!!!

awwww I really really like the way you think about and understand the characters' personalities and interactions when creating fan art. It's really cute. I think the last one is particularly beautiful, exquisite and full of tension!! It's really perfect and you have really made great progress TT I really love them!!!! You are truly wonderful TT Thank yoooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!o(╥﹏╥)o

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OMG I can't believe it TT It's so cute!!! Wow, kitty Aris!!!! So adorable, the two of  cutiee.. I love it!! It's so beautiful and heartwarming TT. You're really good at making crafts!!!(*^▽^*)

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Hihi! Thank you for liking kitty Aris so much! I was actually supposed to send in a comic to go with the image of kitty Aris, but I got too excited..

Here you go, I hope you can understand it! It was written with a translator, so it might not be the best..

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Also, extra image of kitty Aris!!
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OMG I can't believe this is real TT It's so cute... Such a beautiful, adorable, and fun little comic... The interactions between BA in my mind are exactly like this!!!(灬ꈍ ꈍ灬)You've captured A's little expressions and personality so well!! The movements of those two are so very lively and vivid!! So full of energy and life!

! Oh my gosh, this is just too cute... You're really talented at this ahhhh I love this comic so much!!! TT BA are just amazing together!!!!!

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IM YOUR BIGGEST FAN!!! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD GAME I STUMBLED ACROSS SUCH A GEMM!! words cannot stress how happy i am that i found thiss! I will be working hard to recruit more people!! Question, if i were to make a  video edit of a character, would i be able to use the in game art for it? 

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Of course! The game's art materials can be used freely as long as they're not for commercial purposes. Soooo glad you enjoyed and liked the game!! If you end up making a video and finish it, please do let me know the link! I really love fan creations ...(////3▽3////)

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Loved this game so much! Aris's personality and how he changes with the story and choices are my favorite part of the game, of course after the rebellion parts. The routes and everything got made perfectly, the endings... there are many, but I enjoyed each and every one!


But i have a question, are all endings completeable or am i just missing something, because except these 2 (and the collector's special) I can't get all, i tried but i just don't get it!

Pls help!😅

And another question, is the game complete yet (excluding bug fixes)? Or will it continue? The story is too good to be its end!😭

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So glad to hear that you're enjoying the game! Yes, the game is still unfinished, and I plan to complete and upload the D789 update (including bug fixes) by the end of the month! Complete verision of Each route will have twelve chapters and two ending chapters, plus more short endings!

For the two missing endings, they should be found in the two small branches of B456!

 For B5 one, you need to hide yourself when Andershcha offers help, and then fail the branch option facing D;

For B6 one, you need to let the time exceed the limit bar during the long talk with Na Xue, and choose the corresponding option (I don't remember what it is! But it should be simple).

You can also check the Walkthough in the downloadable file for more information for BE10 and BE11!! Thank you for efforts in collecting these endings!!(*^▽^*)

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Thanks! And i can't wait for more endings! Definitely gonna get them all!😁

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I got them! The problem was why i couldn't notice these, because it didn't show the text that it was rolling... so.... found a bug

ohno…… more bugs TT But still, celebrate your collection!

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ahh i rlly love this game, the art, storyline and characters are so well written!!! also it's times like these i regret i didnt learn chinese (to read the options) but whatever lol. just wanted to say that i really appreciate your efforts in putting love into the game and i'll definitely try my best to complete all the endings and get all the achievements❤️

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Thank you!!(*^▽^*) It seems this bug has been troubling quite a few people, sorry about that... But I'm so happy that you enjoyed the game! I spent ages thinking and rewriting the script TT, so it's truly uplifting to know that someone is willing to  dive deep into it! Anyway, Thank you for playing~ 💖🔥❤️

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i absolute love playing this game, but for some reason my option text is almost all the time in chinese, is there any way i can fix this? >.<

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Sorry!! This is a malignant bug! I 'm going to fix it in the next D789 update o(╥﹏╥)o I' m working hard on making and modifying the update, and it will probably be done by the end of this month!! so sorry for the bad experience ahhh TT

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ty!!!! I'm looking forward for the next update ⸜(。˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝♡ Keep up the good work (ෆ˙ᵕ˙ෆ)♡!!! We all love you gang!

(buppy)

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Thank you!! This is so delightful and cute! I'll finish the work as soon as possible!! (*^▽^*)

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aahahha this game is so intriguing, i played it well into the night, i look forward to finishing it :33 

i was able to procure a lot of the endings, i only have a few left. the game really captured my attention, with aris's personality and caeran, deacon, and bryant's stories.

my favorite ended up being bryant, i like him very much :DD the artwork is also very amazing!!

thank you very much for the content, i'll be supporting you!!

Thank you!! I'm very glad that you enjoy this game so much!(*^▽^*) I will finish it as soon as possible!!

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Bryant Norin!!! Wow.. so cool.. so awesome!!!! (I'm going to buy a flag with him plastered on top next..)

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OMG, this is just too cute!!! You even drew comics for them and made dolls by hand! OWWW, this is so cute... I really love the chibi art of P4, wow, it's amazing... So cute I'm about to cry ...!😭 can't wait to see the flag! I really want to see more photos of cute products!! 💖💕owww it's so nice...

I'm so shocked! Your drawing skills have improved so quickly! The chibi style and coloring are so beautiful, and you're even good at handmake! It's really impressive..💕💕💕

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i feel like it's a must to play this game. I haven't yet, but it's sooo tempting with that name...

That's really great! This is a compliment that makes me proud.

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what on earth is that name?

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Isn't it very interesting? The success of this name lies in its ability to draw you in.

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Now that is true, i was searching for some VN and the name caught my attention right away! I was like "fried chicken love novel?"🤣🤣

Hearing this makes me very proud(>^ω^<)

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https://vt.tiktok.com/ZSkBpJjnS/  Hi!! It's me again! I might like the game a bit tad much but here's an animation meme I made from this..my bad if it's ooc I personally can't find any other toxic animation sounds that are related to them🤞🤞 Ggrgrr once again I cant want for more updates!! I LOVE this visual novel holy crap. I posted tbis on tiktok cos I have no idea how to add videos here💔💔 game so underrated I posted it on my main and it flopped so badf💔💔 this really need a more attention 💔💔🤞

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Thank you!!! I love this little meme it's cute and creepy!!! Perfect fit for the vibe of C456 and C789's midpart 💖❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thanks for makeing and sharing this meme!! It's super heartwarming (*^▽^*) I love it so musch!!! owww CA are just adorable together .,,,,,TT

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sorry writer. emm......I wonder if Aris a boy?

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yes? it's a bl game?

He is a normal adult male. just  looks young but has no gender dysphoria or anything like that. This is not the theme of this game. 

I'm very surprised why you asked this question? TT This really shocked and hurt me a little...

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I am really sorry.I did not know this at first beacause I did not finish reading the introduction.(crying emoji)

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It's okay! I was shocked because I thought my portrayal (of the visuals and the plot) failed so much that players couldn't distinguish the gender of the protagonist... But later I realized that It was just a label, gender wasn't that important for an interesting character ww So this didn't trouble me for long!

AnywayThanks for playing!(*^▽^*)

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I LOVE THIS SM I love how complex and well written the characters are and MC isnt a cry baby nor someone weak. Their backstories affected how they are as of now and it shows the MC has confused understanding of his feelings for bryant!! Also Caeran's just super duper cute and innocent-looking that you really wouldn't believe he's crazy af😭😭 Out of the 3 tropes, Caeran's the cutest in my opinion 🤞🤞 yes I have favorites 😂 anyway here's a fan art of my goat and I can't wait for furthermore updates!! 

OMG, I absolutely love this beautiful fanart!!! I was also shocked that someone likes C so much!!! Yes, he is really cute and complex!!! I'm so glad you like him! I also agree with your understanding of Caeran, "super cute and innocent but really crazy," yes, that's exactly him TT.

Thank you so much for your fanart! May I share it on Chinese social media? I really really love it!!(✿◡‿◡)

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Of course!!! thank you for appreciating my art!! i really love the game and the art with in and its such an honor for someone such as yourself to share my art work!! (if you don't mind please credit me w/ @allixci on tiktok!!)🤞🤞🤞 also please excuse me misspelling Caeran's name i Have a horrible habit of forgetting names!😭😭😭!! im looking forward with updates prior to this game!! i hope i dont sound mean 💔💔💔💔

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Thank you!! No worries about the typos, I can understand and think it's cute! Frankly, I also struggle to remember names, so I refer to everyone by their initials ww Names are really hard to remember TT

I'm currently working full - throttle on the update! But since the plot is quite lengthy this time, it's taking longer. I estimate it will take another 10 - 15 days. Thanks for your praise and the fanart! It's truly nice andbeautiful!

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I FORGOT TO ADD HIS FRECKLES IM SO SORRY

oww It's okay!!! still very cute...

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再次品鉴了 非常好作品 美味的四个入 作者快点把D789端上来罢

在做了在做了!!50%了!!

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hi! I return with cake Deacon! (The cake was too warm and the icing was too  watery,,)

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Its accurate, isnt it?

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Glad to see you again! I was really shocked by the cake,  it's so interesting and it really captures Deacon's classic color scheme! You even added hearts to the eyes? That's really creative! I don't know much about baking, but this must have been quite a challenge. I hope the cake Deacon  was delicious~(^▽^)

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Interesting game! I'm at part 2 of the first common, and its a good game so far!! I like the GUI and "mechanics"!

Thank you for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and there's more to come! (^▽^)

Regarding the bug you mentioned in your review, you can try changing the language back to English in the Settings to see if that resolves the issue.

I haven't seen anyone else report this problem, so I'm quite surprised! If it happens again, please take a screenshot and let me know! I'll see what I can do to fix it.

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Hello! I'm very glad there'll be more! Yes, My review of the bug was quite vague as I was in a hurry, so I apologize for that. I'll describe the issue and my little experiments in more detail here. Although I am by no means a programming expert, so I might state something 'obvious' or use the wrong terms. I've also provided some screenshots.

I'll say it in the beginning here, so you don't have to worry. 
The dialogue box always remains in English, even after the 'rollback'. The dialogue box isn't the bug here ^^!! It really are just the choices.


When I click an option, then roll back the dialogue (with the mouse roller), that option that I've previously picked turns chinese. It stays like that for the remaining of the gameplay and piles up (as in, it stays, and when I pick the other option, the other option turns chinese as well. In the end, when I've picked all the options, they all remain chinese.) 


BEFORE


As you can see before the first option, I went through this part before and chose the bottom option once, which is why it's in chinese.

So now when I pick "Try to escape", the story works perfectly fine and moves on as it normally does.


After picking the top option, I rollback the dialogue to the option again, and the following shows:


So yeah, in conclusion, the option changes to chinese once I've picked it.


Also when I started a new game,  I initially thought that the bug was fixed, so I assumed that it was only with my loaded saves, but I was wrong. It really is throughout the whole game and isn't solved by starting a 'new' progress. (The reason I thought wrong was because it was just new options on the second walkthrough).

Changing it to chinese, then english also doesn't change anything. I tried seeing if it may be the "Read text color" (Which I had on), was the problem. So I turned that off, but it unfortunately wasn't that. 

I tend to save the game on the choices, so I can remember what part of the story the save is at. The save display/data shows that option still in english, but when I load it, its chinese. Though I presume its because the Screen is screenshotted to show as a display during the save.

Other than the options to choose, I also noticed during switching that in the configuration/settings on chinese, some of the text/titles above the preferences remain english when it should be chinese.  (Picture below: Display, Skip, Read Text Color, Speech Pauses)




This one below is in chapter 4- bryant (route?). The rollback doesn't affect the language! When I pick "I dreamt of my mother" it stays in english. The option above that one was just in chinese as a default. So I presume the parts with that type of screen dont need any fixing regarding the 'choices' bug.


^... though the next 2 choice branches, show the all 2-3 options in chinese only, even though I havent gotten to that part before, so its like that as a default again.


Regarding my laptop, it's relatively new and a windows 11. I downloaded the right version of this game as well (as in, the one for windows rather than mac).

I hope this was helpful, and that it was just something, somehow with my download process gone wrong haha.  Though I don't especially struggle with downloading games, especially ones from itch.io. I could redownload it when I finish it, or when the new version comes out to see if this bug still prevails. 

I wish you a good day and good luck! Thank you for your hard work! :D

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Thank you for posting such detailed instructions! I have some clues now. This should be because I added the function of changing the color of selected options in the last update, and it is permanent for the entire game; this function works normally for Chinese, but Ren'Py's translation function is very detailed when it comes to options, and the color is also taken into account. So when the translated text needs to change color, it can't find the corresponding data.

Unfortunately, I can't update this error right now TT, D789 has been a struggle for me, and if I modify the translation at this point, a lot of things will go wrong (as I said, Ren'Py is very detailed about translation!) I will fix this error in the next D789 update.! (Also, there is no error in the settings! It's designed that way... to look good TT

This should be a bug that usually happens, and I'm shocked that no one has mentioned it before! Thank you for taking the time to edit these words, it helps a lot!!(*^▽^*)

Since I can't fix it at the moment, if you want to keep playing the game, you can try the following method: Use a screenshot translator! When Chinese text appears, you can translate it into English to read the text. (I usually use https://fanyi.youdao.com/; both have the web version or the app version.) Alternatively waiting for me to update the new version! This might take more than half a month or even a month, as the workload this time is quite substantial...TT

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Hello, I'm a game fan from Thailand. I really like your game. Both the graphics and the characters are very good.  😭

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I actually drew some fan art for you, But before I couldn't upload this job, now I can <3

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omg, this is really very beautiful!! I admire how you use colors to make Bryant look very shiny and have a mysterious beauty. You really have a talent for painting! The face, hair and tail are treated very exquisitely and beautifully. Thanks for your fan art!! I love it!

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I have other fanarts, I'm sorry if I reply too much. 😓 

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OMG it's sooooo cute!!!!!!(╥﹏╥) I shared this drawing with a friend who also loves BA and this ending, and she said it's exactly the BA in her heart!! I feel the same way; you can tell which ending it is at first glance.

I'm really impressed by the composition, atmosphere, and how you handled the expressions in this drawing, especially Aris—you depicted him like an angel (灬ꈍ ꈍ灬)... I really love your use of color!! Especially how you handled the characters' faces, it's so beautiful.

Thank you for your fan art! This is the best thing I've seen this month TT It's so beautiful, and you really have a talent for drawing, They convey emotions so well, something I often regret not being able to do myself. I really hope you keep drawing!!! 

If it's okay with you, may I share them on Chinese social media? A lot of friends who love BA would be delighted(*^▽^*) Should I attach the name @GIMGI, or do you have other names or accounts that you are willing to make public?

Sorry for typing so many words!! I really like your paintings!!!

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I'm okay with you posting these photos on Chinese social media, and I'm so grateful and happy that you like them. <33 You can give credit @GIMGI or @pathétique.  thank you >3


Can I post these fanarts on Tiktok or any other social media? 。⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠。

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hii i love this game sm >_< i decided to redraw one of the scenes i got when i first played!!!! my baby :3 i hope u like it, its not the best tho TwT

This is really cute!! I'm really surprised that someone is interested in him ww. His popularity is really low. Thank you for your painting!! I like it!

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Thank you!!!!

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天哪...吃到好吃的了好冷的圈子..我要在各平台關注你..(x

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還有B真的好合我的胃口...

啊啊好搞笑……感谢老大喜欢!!B人气真的好高啊好搞笑。。

誰叫他一開始就色誘我...美人魚是好文明...

支持A被B美人魚爆炒..

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還有D壓A肚子好色.

冷圈冷冷地...好希望火  又怕有小鬼 QwQ

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笑死我了………………题材比较小众应该没那么容易火!完结应该会好点!

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What a insane game!EXSPECIALLY Aris.

The game told us "Bullying produces love".This mental state is quite crazy.

Wait!! This is not the view of love that I want to express!! uh ah ah ah ah!! 

It can only be said that everyone's mental state is not very good, so they understand and comfort each other!! Only DA is more like voluntary SM Play. (Voluntary highlighting!!!) The essence is mutual service and distorted stress relief.  

I attempt to describe the distorted relationships formed under distorted social and family conditions, but it is not recommended in reality!!!!!!!!NO!!!!

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This game is genuinely insane.. but I can't seem to stop playing?!! 😭😭😭😭 Me and my friend have been playing it nonstop and she can't seem to stop mentioning wanting to see more mermaid Bryant,, Anyway, I look forward to seeing future content of this game!

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Wow!! Thank you and your friends! I think madness is the feature of this game.So glad you two can enjoy it! (*^▽^*)

Sounds like your friend likes Mermaid Bryant very much. Unfortunately, there won't be more content about this aspect in the game (灬ꈍ ꈍ灬) But I did draw a related image! I've stick it below. Hope she likes it!!

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Ahh thank you so much for replying!! I showed this art to my friend and now she won't stop mentioning it during school haha (me too)

I drew this art for you as a thanks for creating this amazing game about fried chicken, here!!

awww Thank you, !! I really like these two paintings. They are really, really cute!! Especially the last one of  ADB, it reminds me of the childhood of the three of them that I've been writing about recently. It's super cute and wholesome!

I wonder if I can post these two artworks on my social media in China for my friends to see? (*^▽^*) It's okay if it doesn't work out! Thank you! This is really so cute!!

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It would be an honor! You can use it as you'd like!!

Thank you so much!! I really love your arts!!!! awwww(〃'▽'〃)

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The art is so good !! The storyline, characters, and art are soooo well made ^v^ !! I'm also loving Bryant's route ! He's so far my favourite character too, and I like your writing style as well by the way. This is so far the best game I've come across, so I'll really keep playing it until it's completed! Wish you the best luck :))

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Thank you! I'm very glad that you enjoy this game! This is really delightful. 

I'm working hard on writing the script for D789. Stay tuned!!(✿◡‿◡)

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